I dislike that people get
juged by the outside and not
the out .
You mite say that you know how
people feel but
you don't you know how you
in the inside and out.
People get judged by what they
wear and how they act.
But the question is why?
If its not you then leave others
alone because you
wouldn't want people to talk
about you.
You respect and treat others
the way you want
to be treated.
I like yours because I agree how you say, "I dislike how people get judged by the outside". I really understand how you feel. I like the way how you tell the moral of your poem. You said, "Respect and treat others the way you want to feel."
ReplyDeleteI like your poem, good job!! :)..............
well i like it but you have some mis spelled words thank you for your time
ReplyDelete:').... I loved what you said Aysia when you wrote that "when someone is being judged it is what they wear or how they act" that is what makes me sad the most cause know person in this crappy world does not understand someone who is really different. I love this poem the most Aysia you did a good job and you deserve to get a good grade from facts that are really true. XD!!!!!!! GOOD JOB!!!
ReplyDeleteThank you everyone and yeah i hope i get a grade on it Christain
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